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Rave
12-11-2007, 12:12 AM
"Hurry up or you'll be late!" Scott's mom said, dragging his backpack down the floor. "Your gonna be late for school"
Scott opened his eyes only to see the bright light of the morning sun, and the groggy feeling in his eyes when he woke up. He got up slowly but felt an enormous, unbearable pain in his head that made him instantly put his head down in his pillow.
"Scott! Hurry!" His mom yelled. Only to make his head hurt more. She ran upstairs.
"Scott get up!" He could only stare at her. If he talked his head would probably explode.
"Oh honey you don't look to good..."
She went over to feel his head. Once she put her hand on his head he screamed in pain, just making his head hurt more.
"Uh oh. this looks serious." His mom said. "Scott stay in bed I'm going to call an ambulance over."
10 minutes later an ambulance came and rushed Scott over to the hospital. His mom, waiting in the lobby crying and worried over her son is a little bit relieved to see the doctor.
"Mrs. Anderson..."
"Yes"
"Your son has a brain tumor... We will have to do surgery to remove it..."
She burst our crying. Every tear was a tear for her son going through the same pain she was going through.
"Ok. Do what you must" She said.
The doctor nodded and turned around.
"Prep this kid for brain surgery" The surgeon nodded and walked away.
------Two Hours Later During surgery------

"Ok I'm going to make the first incision" The surgeon said.
He took the scalpel in gently put it in Scott's head. Once all the cutting was done they looked at the tumor. Covered by blood and other fluids the take the scalpel and begin removing it.
The put the scalpel on the tumor and then...
"Uh oh" the surgeon said...

Many things can go wrong in the line of a doctor. But I leave this up to you.
Do you think that Scott will live or die?

*AJ*
12-11-2007, 02:05 AM
Dude, I want Scott to live. How old is Scott? did you write this yourself?
As much I want him to live, if you're going to complete this story then maybe Scott should die. Most stories have a happy ending but in reality many do not and I think they tend to be forgotten, so for that reason I vote Scott will end up dying. Sorry :cry:

Edit: now that I voted it just makes me look really evil :sad:

Deadpan
12-11-2007, 02:13 AM
lol that doesn't make you look evil AJ. But even though AJ listed really, really, really good reason, I think I'll vote for Scott to live ;P. Although part of me feels some literary deaths should have happened that didn't (Harry Potter...) I just don't feel like the kid should croak. Yet.

Bad_MaNneR$
12-11-2007, 06:19 AM
Perhaps he should die. Upon first glance, the post appears to be written in English. However, as you read through, it becomes clear that it's not in English. Not sure what the underlying intent of this is, so I vote to snuff the little f♥♥♥er out.

Tink
12-11-2007, 11:13 AM
Cant we have an option for 'not bothered either way?' :P

Vik
12-11-2007, 01:20 PM
That's called not voting :P

I voted live.

tasha
12-11-2007, 03:50 PM
I went live... but I don't get it... is this what we want to happen or think will happen?

+ are we supposed to be continuing the story or will something else be posted...?

Nay
12-11-2007, 03:58 PM
I don't know; maybe Scott did something awful the day before...
And such a short story hardly creates suspense. You don't give us time to get into Scott's world

Vik
12-11-2007, 04:03 PM
I'm guessing that depending on our decision, the original writer will add more to the story, thus making it longer and more detailed as time goes on.

This will get tricky as regards the polls... I don't really want to see 10 threads of this story hanging around because you need to create a new poll each time. Please contact me and maybe we can do something about that and keep it in one thread.

NoHints
12-11-2007, 04:07 PM
I don't know; maybe Scott did something awful the day before...
And such a short story hardly creates suspense. You don't give us time to get into Scott's world

I heard he kicked a new born kitten.

Karma.

luvducks
12-11-2007, 06:21 PM
Well never the less he's a child, I voted he should live.

Buffers
12-11-2007, 07:18 PM
I'm yet to see any real point to this, but if the question is, "Will he live or die?", he'll die regardless of brain tumour, because we all do eventually.

Cheery thought...

reecer6
13-11-2007, 11:31 PM
he'll live. maybe he said "uh oh" because a tiny piece of the math part of his brain got chipped.

Bad_MaNneR$
14-11-2007, 05:56 AM
I heard he kicked a new born kitten.

Karma.


Sad Hippy? Karma ran over his Dogma :rolleyes:

Rave
14-11-2007, 05:17 PM
I will write the ending later. :)

Faith
15-11-2007, 08:54 AM
My prediction is that he would live. He's just an innocent child...And God wouldn't let him die so easily xD And perhaps a miracle would happen somehow :) I've read stories like these and usually if something funny happens it will continue funny >< I can't be sure though :)

/me wants Rave to reveal the rest of the story as soon as possibleee.

Buffers
15-11-2007, 11:24 AM
/me wonders if the thousands of children that die daily aren't as innocent as the one in the story.

Thelovebelow
28-12-2007, 10:49 PM
so? is he gonna live?

Charlotte!
29-12-2007, 06:39 AM
I voted live... Oh come on, he's just a child and he's got a long way to go... So how is he gonna die just like that? Oh well, this is just a story and not a real life one right? I hope so...

Rave please reveal the second part of the story soon. :)

reecer6
29-12-2007, 04:35 PM
please post the rest soon!